一、 作文开头万能句1、With the development of technology and science,随着科学技术的发展（后面一定要接句子，不能单独使用）With the growth \progress of technology and science= Coincident with the advancement of science and technology.2、Considering the worsening situation in China, attention must be poured into protecting the environment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况，环境保护需要引起更多的重视)3、The first five years of the new century witnessed the increasing development of China.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展) As the global economy grows at a fever pitch,……4、Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an unfavorable and prevalent phenomenon in China. 5、There are growing concern for …… 6、In recent years, it is common to see\hear that ……7、There is a general tendency that……（有一种趋势）二、 作文内容的陈述结构in the first place/ secondly/ on top of that以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。
1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等 〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等 ①强调句〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday. It was yesterday that I met him in the street. ②由with或without引导的短语。
如: He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ③分词短语如: Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment. ④倒装句如: Only in this way can we achieve our goal.Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person. ⑤省略句如:If so，victory will be ours. You can make some changes wherever necessary.3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力 〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. 〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. 〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
4.学会使用过渡词如: ①递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等 ②转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等 ③总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等 ④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, 5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。
如: 〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown. 〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语如: 〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.三、 结尾1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……5、 Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.四、 一些用法1、 陈述个人的观点It is alleged that(据说)In my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)As far as I am concerned(就我而言)As regards to meMy own point of view is that……Personally, I believe that……My experience tells me that……The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.2、 陈述别人的观点Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……（错误的观点）sb is under the false belief that……3、 图表作文The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the pictureSales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.五、好的替代the machine\the device 代替 computerhandset代替 cell phone*The Middle Kingdom代替 Chinaintensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)approaches代替 wayscurrent(currently) 代替 nowgrowing individuals代替 more and more peopleindividuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 goodunfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 badan army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot oftake the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 thinkaffair, business, matter 代替 thingfor my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinionbeneficial, rewarding 代替 helpfulexceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 verypour attention into代替 pay attention to bear in mind that代替rememberenjoy, possess代替 haveto name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance 六、 常用短语老年人the old\elderly\ aged\ elderly population\ senior citizens年轻人youth\youngster\ young adults\ adolescent 中年人middle adults网吧cyber café 网虫mouse potato 电视迷couch potato优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/top students 坏的影响ill effects农村rural 郊区suburban 城里urban在当代社会in contemporary society双赢a win-win situation 双输 a lose-lose situation 建设有中国特色的社会主义build socialism with Chinese characteristics ,form a economic system with Chinese characteristics七、 写信中I would appreciate it very much If you ……I am thrilled to receive your mail.Looking forward to a prompt response.八、 好的短语1、 have growing respect for 越来越重视Coincident with the fast growing economy, China has growing respect for protecting the environment and controlling population. 随着经济的迅速发展，中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。
2、 enable sb to do sth （使某人可以做某事）It enable us to build a harmonious society.3、 另外 In addition/ Additionally/ on top of thatAdditionally, there is another reason for the appearance of this phenomenon.(现象)九、 好的句子The real power resides in the people.(真正的权力属于人民)We must fight against the bureaucracy in order to improve governmental work.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率，我们必须与官僚作风作斗争)Litter by little, our knowledge will be enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.(慢慢的，我们的知识会充实，我们的视野会开阔)As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.(常言道，任何事物都有两面的。
)也可以用 every sword has two edges. Everything has both dark sides and bright sides.Taiwan is an integral part of China.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分)十、 最简单的格式Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an unfavorable坏的现象 (favorable好的现象) and prevalent phenomenon in China. It is estimated that (相关数据，例如：eight out of ten individuals possess a handset十个人中有八个有了). Why have there been so many (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly /in the first place (原因一). Besides,/secondly (原因二). On top of that/additionally (原因三). the main cause of (某种现象) is due to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解决办法一). On the other hand, (解决办法二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某种现象).All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）Many senior middle school students devote a large slice of their leisure time to playing web games./ to planted themselves in front of the computer.Those days when the cell phone, initially a brick shape item, was the source of the pride of the rich, are something of the past.Those days when the car, initially a tool only for authorities, are long gone.There has been an unshakable truth for most people that academic degree and one’s ability is complementary each other.One sad fact about human nature is that we don’t seem to appreciate what we have till it’s gone.Computer can function in disserve of human beings, in a way, especially violence, AV-films, porn pictures.Private cars also function in the disserve of human beings, especially pollution ,consumption of energy and traffic.As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computer do play a positive role in the development of people’s lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet/aspect.阅读理解中subjective（主观） subjective（客观）should后面是观点，重点把握完形填空选不出来就填转折，关注第一句话，定语从句，which 后面的信息很重要，用副词开头，后面是专家或作者的观点（情态动词也一样）英语四级考试作文通用经典句型 一）比较 1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 3.A may be preferable to B， but A suffers from the disadvantages that.。
4.It is reasonable to maintain that but it would be foolish to claim that. 5.For all the disadvantages， it has its compensating advantages. 6.Like anything else， it has its faults. 7.A and B has several points in common. 8.A bears some resemblances to B. 9.However， the s me is not applicable to B. 10. A and B differ in several ways. 11. Evidently， it has both negative and positive effects. 12. People used to think but things are different now. 13. The same is true of B. 14. Wondering as A nbspis ，it has its drawbacks. 15. It is true that A 。
， but the chief faults （obvious defects ）are 二）原因 1. A number of factors are accountable for this situation. A number of factors might contribute to （lead to ）（account& bspfor ） the phenomenon（problem） 2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that. 4. The factors that contribute to this situation include. 5. The change in largely results from the fact&n spthat. 6. We may blame but the real causes are. 7. Part of the explanations for it is that 。
One of the most common factors （causes ） is that Another contributing factor （cause ） is Perhaps the primary actor is that … But the fundamental cause is that 三） 后果 1. It may give rise to a host of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon. 4. Its consequence can&nb pbe so great that. 四）批驳 1）It is true that but one vital point is being left out. 2） There is a grain of truth in these statements， but they ignore a more important fact. 3） Some people say 。
but it does not h ld water. 4） Many of us have been under the illusion that. 5） A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 6） It makes no sense to argue for 7） Too much stress placed on may lead to 8） Suc a statement mainly rests on the assumption that 9） Contrary to what is widely accepted， I maintain that 五）举例 1） A good case in point is 2） As an illustration， we may take 3） Such examples might be given easily. 4） is often cited as an example. 六）证明 1） No one can deny the fact that 。
2） The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3） Unfortunately， none of the available data shows 4） Recent studies indicate that 采集者退散 5） There is sufficient evidence to show that 6） According to statistics proved by it can be seen that 七）开篇 1） Many nations have been faced with the problem of 2） Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3） Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4） Recently the issue has aroused great concern among 5） Nowadays there is a growing concern over 。
6） Never in our history has the idea that been so popular. 7） Faced with quite a few people argue that 8） According to a recent survey， 9） With the rapid development of 八）结尾 1） From what has been discussed above， we can draw the conclusion that 2） It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop 3） It is necessary that steps should be taken to 4） In conclusion， it is imperative that 5） There is no easy method， but might be of some help. 6） To solve the above-mentioned problem， we must 。
7） In summary， if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue， more problems will crop up. 8） With the efforts of all parts concerned， the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9） We might do more than identify the cause it is important to take actions to 10） Taking all these into account， we 11） Whether it is good or not /positive or negative， one thing is certain/clear. 相关推荐：2010年12月英语四级写作四大问题 四级写作预测题目及破题套路2010年12月英语四级值得你注意的写作误区 来源：沪江英语 2010/12/5 【考试大：中国教育考试第一门户】 模拟考场 视频课程 字号:T T2010年12月英语四级值得你注意的写作误区：一、平时缺乏训练、没有掌握写作能力。
二、对四六级作文的答题方法缺乏了解三、母语干扰的痕迹非常明显四、对待作文考试的态度不够认真，存有碰运气的侥幸心理 一、平时缺乏训练、没有掌握写作能力 问题：许多考生的写作仍停留在句子水平上，还没有上升到语篇水平上，因此写出的文章不流畅很生硬还有一些学生的语言基础薄弱，中学所学的语言基础知识在大学里没能够得到巩固 二、对四六级作文的答题方法缺乏了解 四六级考试的题型以写Argument类型的文章为主，偶尔也会出现图表作文、信或描述性、说明性的题目采集者退散 三、母语干扰的痕迹非常明显 例如，在1998年1月的作文题目为“Harmfulness of Fake Commodities”有一位考生要表达“别人赚钱有人眼红”这样的意思，他不会使用“envy”或“en-vious”等词语，而是直接把眼红翻成了“red eyes”，使人感到费解另一位考生想要讲述自己买了一双假冒皮鞋，不久鞋上开了一个洞这样的意思，就写出了“There was a cave in the shoe”这样的句子这些虽然都是极端的例子，但也反映了母语干扰的一个方面 四、对待作文考试的态度不够认真，存有碰运气的侥幸心理。
一些考生认为作文的好坏没有客观的标准，分数的高低取决于评阅人一时的好恶这是对作文批阅的误解这种心理反映在卷面上就是敷衍了事，不加思索，一挥而就许多考生拿到作文题目以后没有认真审题、构思，而是提笔就写在写作过程中也没有斟词酌句，严密地组织句子在阅卷过程中发现许多考生字迹潦草，卷面凌乱，大小写、标点符号等都被一概忽略了在最后的冲刺复习时间里，我们可以做些什么事情提高或改善写作分数呢？具有多年一线教学经验的老师给出两点建议 第一、背范文 老师告诉大家，在写作方面，考生所碰到的难题中，其中一个就是“中文式英文”因为中英文的思维差距是很大的，一旦偶们在考场上写的表达，句型是考生自己临时想出来的话，很有可能就是“中文式英文”，这在阅卷中，扣分是扣得很厉害的那怎么样才能解决“中文式英文”这个难题呢?老师强调：“地道的英文不是创造出来的，而是模仿出来的只有在写表达，写句子时，我们能在地道的英文文章中找到模仿的对象，我们写的英文才是地道的英文采集者退散 所以在最后不到一个月的时间里，老师建议广大考生们，适当地背一些范文，对你会很有帮助 第二、默模板 对于模板的问题，有太多的争议到底要不要用模板呢?老师观点是：要用，而且必需用。
很简单的逻辑，尽管使用模板有各种各样的不足，连街边卖麻辣烫的大婶都知道如果能自己写出一篇完全原创的文章是最好的我们可以反问自己，“如果不用模板，你能写出完全原创的文章吗?”对于绝大部分考生来说，可能是很难的 所以，在最后不到一个月的时间里，我们要重视“模板”我们不仅要“背”模板，更关键的是要“默”模板因为毕竟在考场上我们是要写下来的，很多考生尽管心里对模板记忆得很熟悉，但一旦要求用笔写下来的话，就会不可避免地出现各种各样意想不到的问题所以老师提醒广大考生，一定要用笔“默”模板 如 需要指出的是，虽然写作作为一个输出过程考验的是内功，需要提前长期积累沉淀，但对于应试作文这个事件来说，则可以做到短时期内的“速成”这是因在考试语境下，其作文结构框架的恒定性和内容的可预见性，于是快速搭建起一个满足考试要求的段落结构并填塞相应内容，不仅是我们要去做的，而且是可以实现的 首先，来看文章的段落结构对于四级作文来说，固定为三段三段可以根据提纲而行事，即每段基本上是对提纲的回答，并在段与段间添加适当的承接词，即可形成一篇三段文也可以对提纲稍作调整，形成一套新的三段结构，但要保证提纲所示内容要在文章中出现。
例如：：2006年12月的四级作文真题提纲如下：1很多人认为春晚没必要另一些人观点相反我的观点是…….该道题是典型的“正反对比”题，在涉及结构时，可以写成问题回答式，即三段分别是对每一个提纲的回复也可以稍作调整，比如：把提纲12整合成为一段用来介绍别人的观点(包括正方和反方);而我的观点又作为单独一段，那么还差一段，则自行添加一开篇段即可，该开篇段用来介绍问题的提出，想来也合理如此调整，文章就成为如下样式： 1、开篇段：话题的提出来源： 2、别人观点段：正方观点和反方观点 3、我的观点段：由于该排篇布局具有稳定性，不妨固定下来，作为对正反对比题解决的一种固定套路然后，来看文章的内容要求对于四级作文来说(其他类考试亦如此)，其提纲内容符合人性人理，所以都在人之常情之内，仔细分析，便不难挑拨雾纱看到真肌理比如现象分析题，不难发现多是负面现象类继续推导：既然负面现象，是不是会让你去分析其背后的原因?既然是负面现象，是不是会让你分析它所带来的危害?还有，既然是负面现象，是不是有必要采取措施解决一下呢?如此想来，那么对于现象分析题，其所考察的内容，已经预见十之八九了结果常常是：段1：现象的提出;段2：现象背后原因的分析;段3：危害分析/ 措施采取。
再往前走一步，既然内容都可提前预备，不妨将相应常用句型一起预备好，如常见的表达原因的句型有哪些?表达措施的句型有哪些?等等 一些思路，供大家参考，希望有益果你能在最后的冲刺时间里，认真做到以上这两点，老师坚信你的写作成绩将会有大幅度的提升2010年12月英语四级写作冲刺：作文解题套路 来源：沪江英语 2010/12/10 【考试大：中国教育考试第一门户】 模拟考场 视频课程 字号:T T提到作文，很多同学都会感到无从下手其实四级作文并非高不可攀，只要大家依据提纲多多联想，抓住最初的感动，在常理的指导下，将所欲传达的内容用确切的文字装载出即可过关得胜下面一起来看看几道四级作文例题的分析 一、四级作文概述 四级作文是提纲作文，一般按提纲写出相应段落即可在文章内容上无需追求高深新颖，切题合理便可落笔;在思路逻辑上则要求句意通顺，文字流畅;在文字表现上要求无语法错误，个别小错可忽略(如动介搭配，单词拼写等不涉及语法类小错)另外，值得一提的是，在篇章结构上建议写三段，所以即便题目只给出两个提纲，最好在完成两个提纲后，再多补充一段，所补内容不限，但须跟话题相关 二、四级作文例题分析 鉴于近年来所考题目以议论文为主，所以给出如下3道议论文模拟题并做一浅析，以供参考。
A. The Shortage of Fresh Water 1、目前淡水资源非常紧缺 2、为什么会出现这种情况 3、该如何解决 96年6月份曾考过此题，今天来看，似乎更有现实意义这是一道负面社会现象题，那么挖掘其背后根源，并找出解决方案，就成为探讨的主要方面，而提纲也正是如此三个提纲各属其类，界限清晰，直接按提纲写三段即可段1为提出现象，确立研究对象 提纲1翻译后仅一句话，作为一段话则显内容单薄，字数匮乏，所以需进一步发挥不妨从例证角度扩充，举例时即可基于国内现状，也可纵观全球，显然前者更易行可从我国西南地区的生活缺水，水价上升，以及河流干涸等细节方面铺陈 段2是原因分析，建议分析主观原因和客观原因两方面所谓主观原因即是基于人的思想意念，心理意识，行为动机以及行为举措，比如人们节约意识的淡漠或者人们误认为淡水取之不尽等不当想法而客观原因则是从非人角度出发，如社会发展，人口激增，甚至污染的加剧等方面出发，这些因素均使得淡水消耗的增加当然，考场上由于时间紧迫，无法细想，可能会写出的两个全是主观类或客观类的原因，其实也无妨，只要二者不同即可，谨防虽言明两原因，但实则彼此混淆，出现逻辑不清的窘况。
段3是措施分析，措施可从官方措施和民众措施两方面写起，也可加入作为现代年轻人，我该如何约束自己，从生活中小事做起节约水资源等内容总之，在内容上考生尽可发挥想象力，纵马驰骋，原则依旧：切题者皆可 B. Part-time Jobs for College Students 1、目前大学校园里很多学生业余时间做兼职 2、对于大学生是否该做兼职工作，人们看法不一 3、我的看法 这是一道校园话题，在内容上即涉及现象，又涉及观点，能很好地考察到学生的综合分析能力提纲1依旧是现象提出，看到提纲1，大家脑海里会浮现很多熟悉的场景，如校园布告栏里张贴着的兼职广告，校园论坛上也经常发布的一些兼职信息等等，这些都可反映在段1中所以当我们第一眼看到话题或提纲时，脑海中常常会浮现出相关场景，把这些画面定格，进行详细描绘即可，即自然又切题当然，段1也可从学生的兼职渠道以及兼职类型等方面加以发挥总之，提纲是总领，而符合总领的任何附属内容都可写 段2是人们对此学生兼职的不同看法，一正一反切记在表达上述两类观点时，提出其相关论据段3是提出作者本人看法本人看法既可选择上述任一方(只要不极端)，也可提出与上述均异的第三类观点，对于极度偏激的正反方观点则需做一番调和与勾兑(这个一般很少见)。
需要提醒的是，继提出己方观点后，还应补充其他内容，如论据;也可写我的下一步做法，甚至可写我所认为的大家对此问题所应采取的对策云云 C. Private Cars of Today 1、目前私家车越来多了 2、私家车为人们带来的益处和问题来源： 这道题只有两个提纲，所以建议在完成提纲要求内容之后再补充一段相关内容，可以在提纲2之后续补段3(如举措类：如何合理地限制私家车的出行以减少废气排放等等)，也可在1，2之间插入一段(如原因分析，即为何私家车越来越多) 先来看提纲1，依然是事实陈述，看到提纲1，会很容易联想到马路上川流不息的过往车辆，以及高峰期令人沮丧的堵车，那么即可将这些内容付诸笔端再看提纲2，是私家车给人们生活带来的影响，该事实是一中性事实，则需辩证地分析其影响的两面性，一方面它带来好处，如让人们的出行变得更自由更方便，另一方面它带来坏处，如排放废气，污染环境，或造成交通堵塞等等Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.... 随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes. 然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法) As society develops, people are attaching much importance to.... 随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............ People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting 求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性 As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it. 关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。
当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点 In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. 在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境 Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that.... 最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________ The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention. 人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题 ...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?" _______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。
不过，问题是："我们该如何抉择?" Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges, 现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代 People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case. 不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同 The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue. 这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同 When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer... 说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________ Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person. 俗话说，""。
不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的 To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes. 对于这。