Introduction to a person 基础写作 人物篇 A. 概况 B外貌 ,性格 C生平 D评价 1）肖老师，我们的化学老师，毕业于华 南师范大学 Miss Xie, our Chemistry teacher, graduated from South China Normal University. 2）他爱好广泛，尤其是跳舞 He has many hobbies,especially loving dance. 3）他的教学效果：学生用功，进步快 With his help, we work hard and make great progress. 同位语 非谓语 with 结构 A. 概况 （用 非谓语 /同位语结构 /定从 ，使文章通顺 ) 1) Born on _____________________, ________ became ________________________________ ____________. 出生于 1989年 12月 28号，她后来成为一位学生喜 欢的好老师 2) ___________, the daugther of a _____ family, was born on ___________________. 玲子，一个贫穷家庭的女儿，出生于 1989年 12月 28号 December 28th,1989 she later a good teacher of whom students are fond Ling zi poor December 28th,1989 B外貌 ,性格 (巧用 with做定语 ) 1) 梁志波是个近视的男生 ,他戴着一副眼镜 Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted boy__________________________. 2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。
Yang Yang is good-looking____________. with a pair of glasses on his nose with long hair C生平 (尽量用 定语从 句 ,半倒装 ， 润色文章 ) 1）侯耀文 不仅对科学感兴趣 ,而且有音乐天 赋 Not only_____________________________, but also ________________________. 2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国 家作出了贡献 Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming,__________________________. is Hou Yaowen interested in science he has a gift/talent for music which makes a great contribution to China. D评价 （注意运用一些动词 ,形容词等 短语 /词组） 1）裴继升给我们作出了榜样 , 大家都赞扬他 Pei Jishen _________________________,so all the people _________________________him. 2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一 ,并且将 会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住 . Lu Xun is one of the greatest novelists in China and will ___________________an outstanding man forever. sets us a good example speaks highly of be remembered as 你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问 鲁迅其人及作品。
你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下 （ 1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文 2）著名的作家，思想家，而 且还是中国现代文学的开创者 3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿 Q正传、 祝福这两部影片 4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本 参考词汇： 阿 Q正传： The True Story of AH Q 祝福： The New Year s Sacrifice Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun . _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming （ 5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有益 （ 1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人， 为了国家，弃医从文 句子主干： 鲁迅 弃 医从文 abandon the study of medicine 鲁迅 为了国家 弃医从文 for the country with + n 非谓语 born in. whose 定从 （ 2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中 国现代文学的开创者。
Not only.but also. (否定含义的词放句首时，句子要用半倒 装，既将 be动词、情态动词、助动词提前 ) 你决不能放弃你的生命 In no way can you give up your life. The Father of Modern Chinese Literature. （ 3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电 影，如阿 Q正传、祝福这两部影 片 句子主干： 小说被制成电影 被制成： be made into 被译成 ： be translated into 时态 :现在完成时 which 定从 非谓语 including (4)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学 课本 简单句即可 选入 =收录入 收录入： be collected in 时态 :现在完成时 （ 5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有 益 对 .有益： be beneficial/helpful for sb 非谓语作主语 （ 1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文 2）著名的作家，思 想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者 3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影， 如阿 Q正传、祝福这两部影片 （ 4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。
5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有益 （ 3） 巧用 with做定语 ;倒装 4. 记住 常用描写人物的形容词 模拟试题 1 （见卷子） 根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁 隆平的文章 1袁隆平 , 1937年 9月 7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家 庭 2 1953年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农 校任教 3 1964年开始从事水稻研究 1981年荣获我国第一个 国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父” 4生活简朴，不计名利 注意 ： 1）要有标题 2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语 写作要求 : 只能使用 5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准 : 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和 连贯性 答案 总结 模拟试题 2（见卷子） 请根据以下提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇 简讯介绍我国著名的跨栏运动员 -刘翔，内容要点如 下 ： 刘翔中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军 (track champion)籍贯：生日上海； 1983最值得骄傲的事 1） 雅典奥运会平世界纪录 2） 2006年瑞士洛桑田径超级 大奖赛冠军（ a super grand prix in Lausanne, Switzerland），打破沉睡 13年之久英国运动员保持 的世界纪录下一个目标 2008北京奥运会夺冠，为国 争光 注意 ： 1）要有标题。
2）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译 成英语 写作要求 : 只能使用 5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准 : 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和 连贯性 答案 总结 模拟试题 3 （见卷子） 写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习 中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下 （ 1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文 （ 2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者 （ 3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如 阿 Q正传 、 祝福 这两部影片 （ 4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本 参考词汇： 阿 Q正传： The True Story of AH Q 祝福： The New Years Sacrifice 注意： 介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语 写作要求 : 只能使用 5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准 : 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性 Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun . _________________________________________________________________ Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming 答案 总结 模拟试题 4 （见卷子） 刘平从广告上得知上海某公司需要工程师。
写信应聘要求 内容包含如下要点 (1) 姓名：刘平，年龄 27岁 (2) 2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学日本东京大学 (3) 2005年科研成果显著，获博士学位 (4) 日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒绝了 (5) 为了报效祖国，于 2006年毅然回国 注意：介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语 写作要求： 只能使用 5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准： 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性 Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. ______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours,Liu Ping 答案 模拟试题 1答案 Liuxiang-Our Pride Born in 1983, Shanghai, Liuxiang is Chinas first male Olympic track champion. To our pride, Liuxiang set the world record of Olympics Games in Athens. Whats more, in 2006, he broke the world record and got the championship at a super grand prix in Lausanne, Switzerland. It has caused public concern of the entire world that he smashed the 13-year-old world record in mens 110-meter hurdle kept by British hurdler. Though Liuxiang is a proud world record holder now, his main goal hasnt changed that he will win another gold medal at the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games for our homeland. 返回 模拟试题 2答案 Yuan Longping Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmers family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame. 返回 模拟试题 3答案 Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with the real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine and began to write. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer, a thinker, but also the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot. Yours, 返回 模拟试题 4答案 Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Liu Ping, aged 27. Having graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to Tokyo University .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary result in scientific research and received a doctors degree. A Japanese company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Liu Ping 返回 Conclusion: 1. 人物简介的写作步骤 : 概 , 貌 , 育 , 平 , 评 2. 5个句子整合语言点 ： 1）姓名性别教育经历 2）个人特点爱好 3）工作表现，特点 4）业绩（荣誉） 5）评价 3. 用非谓语 /同位语结构 ;巧用 with做定语 ;倒装 4. 记住 常用描写人物的形容词 Homework 备考 P 31 ( 2 ) 。